leaning into the afternoons,
i cast my sad nets towards your oceanic eyes.
there, in the highest blaze my solitude lengthens and flames;
its arms turning like a drowning man's.
i send out red signals across your absent eyes
that wave like the sea, or the beach by a lighthouse.
you keep only darkness my distant female;
from your regard sometimes, the coast of dread emerges.
leaning into the afternoons,
i fling my sad nets to that sea that is thrashed by your oceanic eyes.
the birds of night peck at the first stars
that flash like my soul when i love you.
the night, gallops on its shadowy mare
shedding blue tassels over the land.
pablo neruda
story of my life... sigh.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I guess this is the reason why I don't really like reading poetry. I know! Let's read source code for dinner! Woohoo!
ReplyDeleteHere's my take:
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Leaning into the never-ending nothing (with apologies to Jennifer Aniston and Pablo Neruda)
leaning into the never-ending nothing
i ask you to get me eyedrops
you get me some and i use them on my tired red eyes
you snuggle next to me and i tell you that i am tired
you look at my red eyes and see
the thousands of miles that i traveled from work
you say not a word, but give me a quick peck
and then off you go to play ragnarok online
leaning over your shoulder, i look at your huntress
and tell you that your stats are all wrong
the bird that has no avian flu is now my dinner
i eat alone while you play ragnarok
the night, well, is black, and we sleep in our bed
tired, bored, disenchanted, poor, and in love
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FUCK! Many thanks to Jam's entry! Tangina, five minutes! Woohoo! HE HE HE HE HE HE...
Free type. It's fun. Oist, Jam, any other Nerudas there? I liked his famous poem back in college.
Adun Nerudas! --ay, mali..
ReplyDeletenabasa ko lang 'to sa powerbooks sa isang libro na puro neruda poems ang laman. ang mahal nga lang nung book. tsk.
ReplyDeleteWOW...beautiful poem. ;) I like your blog too, it's pleasing to the eyes.
ReplyDeletethanks abi! by the way i'm only using a template. :)
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